新概念英语第二册第96课【写作课程】

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第九十六课 The dead return 亡灵返乡

一、摘要写作

1、摘要练习

分别使用快速阅读法、听写法和合并法练习写摘要。

将合并句子写的摘要贴到会员社区。自己根据课文内容，将可以合并的句子合并，去掉一些细节，篇幅争取控制在50字到60字。

2、继续做两句话概括的练习。

用两句概括，请大家自己做。

从第三十一课开始，我不再提供摘要练习的答案。请大家认真做好摘要练习，这是提高表达能力，进而提高写作能力，特别是围绕中心进行写作的好方法。希望大家坚持，我会在会员社区帮大家修改摘要，并且适当做一些讲评，选出比较好的摘要供大家参考。

二、本课重点：修改

任何写作都只是一种表达的努力。努力的结果怎么样需要靠我们自己来审查。这就是修改文章要做的事情。具体来说，也可以先采用回答下列问题的办法：
1. Is there anything new and of some interest to the reader?
2. Is there anything worth the time and effort of our readers’?
3. Does the writing have a clear central point?
4. Are there parts that should be rearranged or cut out?
5. Are there examples or details that can be added, words that should be changed, sentences that should be clearer?
6. Are there any spelling mistakes or format flaws in punctuation marks, space, or indent, etc.?

Finally, you should read it aloud to see how nice it sounds. Or you can have someone else read it aloud for you.

三、值得学习的句子

1. Specially-made lanterns are hung outside each house to help the dead to find their way.
Specially-designed flags are hung on the walls.

2. All night long, people dance and sing.
He is sitting there doing nothing all day long.

四、课后作文练习
请你自己试着修改前面写过的所有作业。
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