新概念英语第二册第93课【写作课程】

Samy讲解

世博英语原创课程，版权归属于世博英语网站。未经世博英语书面授权的转载行为将承担相应法律责任！

第九十三课 A noble gift 崇高的礼物

一、摘要写作

1、摘要练习

分别使用快速阅读法、听写法和合并法练习写摘要。

将合并句子写的摘要贴到会员社区。自己根据课文内容，将可以合并的句子合并，去掉一些细节，篇幅争取控制在50字到60字。

2、继续做两句话概括的练习。

用两句概括，请大家自己做。

从第三十一课开始，我不再提供摘要练习的答案。请大家认真做好摘要练习，这是提高表达能力，进而提高写作能力，特别是围绕中心进行写作的好方法。希望大家坚持，我会在会员社区帮大家修改摘要，并且适当做一些讲评，选出比较好的摘要供大家参考。

二、本课重点：七句话故事练习

今天依然来做一个写故事的练习。故事只有七句话，而且有一定的要求，看你能写出多少个不同的结果。
第一句：以This story took place in … 开始，后面接地点。
第二句：以It was a … 开始，后面接时间、天气等等。
第三句：以On one side there was …开始，后面接一个男的，并对他进行描述，比如Bill Gates with his Microsoft Windows.
第四句：以Nearby was …开始，后面接一个女的，并对她进行描述，比如the Chinese actress Gong Li.
第五句：以He said to her, 开始，后面接他说的话：“…”
第六句：以She replied to him, 开始，后面接她说的话：“…”
第七句：以The consequence was … 开始，然后接后来发生的事情。

做好以后，可以把规定的七句句首，如This story took place in去掉，重新修改，并加以扩充，变成完整的故事。

三、值得学习的句子

1. The great statue, which was designed by the sculptor August Bartholdi, took ten years to complete.
The English class, which was taught by the interpreter three times a week, was rather boring as compared to the Chinese classic poems.
By 1884, a statue which was 151 feet tall had been erected in Paris.
Two years later, a project which cost 2 million dollars was finally completed.

2. It was taken to pieces.
The radio was taken to pieces by the kid.

3. Ever since then, the great monument has been a symbol of liberty for the millions of people who have passed through New York Harbor to make their homes in America.
Ever since then, this couple has been trying to keep away from the topic of children.
It’s time for you to find one place and make your home there.

四、课后作文练习

做一个七句话故事练习。

“世博英语新概念第二册讲座”由世博英语（http://www.360abc.com）制作，未经书面授权，任何转载、抄袭、盗版行为都是违法的。