谢振礼写雅思作文【22】An Ideal Society

IELTS Sample Essay: An Ideal Society
By Mr. Jeenn Lee Hsieh
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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of them fail in making it happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

Example writing:

Thinking about creating an ideal society nowadays is like dreaming rosy and living green. Rosy is the color of a dream for a self-organizing society as harmonious as a paradise in heaven. Meanwhile, green is a color of hope to get the earth far, far away from hell. The two colors match to become a new vision, making sense of a modern community of the people, by the people and for the people. It is said that the universe or heaven is self-organizing while people are not. To be self-organizing requires harmony to which unity in diversity is vital. What matters now is this new vision in shades of rosy and green.

Dream rosy! All rosy visions share a core set of values related to social, economic, political and judicial systems. Full employment. Full well-being. Zero governing. Zero deliquency. Human needs are met. People are rightous, kind, honest, unselfish, accepting, non-judgmental and open to others' views. In short, all is well. The problem is that human weaknesses like greed and short-sightedness cannot make a rosy society happen. Although too good to be feasible, a rosy society has served to be inspiring mankind to be in peace with each other and aim for high goals.

Live green! Not only human beings must look forward to harmony among themselves, but also be realistic about the fate of the global society increasingly threatened by self-destroying activities. Mankind is not particularly in harmony weith Nature. Excessive logging. Illegal hunting. Over-fishing. Air and water pollution. So much so, the entire ecosystem is in danger. Biodiversity losses are too serious not to be stopped. This being the issue, going green is important to make a world a better living place. Thus, this green vision is about eco-solutions as a means to refrain from human self-destruction. Living green helps keep hell away.

Rosy is looking good on green environment in the modern image of an ideal society. Enlightened by rosy visions, mankind has done great things. However, to keep such visions alive, human beings must first save the planet. They are obliged to be eco-friendly and allow Nature to organize on its own. Continuing to harm Nature will turn this planet into the graveyard of human greatness. After that, there will be no visions of whatever color.

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