新概念英语第二册第28课【写作课程】

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第二十八课 No parking

一、上期参考答案

1、摘要写作

The boys put up their tent in the middle of a field and cooked a meal. After the meal they told stories and sang songs. Then it began to rain so they crept into their tent. The boys woke up in the middle of the night. The tent was full of water so they rushed outside. A stream had formed in the field and flowed right under their tent. (69字)

概括型版本：
The boys had a good time before they crept into the tent they set up in the field. Because of the rain, the tent was full of water in the middle of the night. (34字)

2、作文

我把句子先连接起来，供大家写作文参考。
1、Three women went on a week-long trip to Guilin. Three women took a flight to go to Guilin.
Three women went on a week-long trip to Guilin. They took a flight to go there.

2、Three men decided to go on a week-long trip to Guilin. Three men saw three women who were their colleagues at the airport. The three men and three women were on the same trip.
Three men decided to go on the same trip. At the airport they met the three women who were their colleagues.

3、The three men were very happy. The three men became good friends of the three women.
The three men were very happy. They became good friends of the three women.

二、摘要写作

1、摘要练习
分别使用快速阅读法、听写法和合并法练习写摘要。
将合并句子写的摘要贴到会员社区。自己根据课文内容，将可以合并的句子合并，去掉一些细节，篇幅争取控制在50字到60字。答案见下期。

2、继续做两句话概括的练习。
用两句概括，请大家自己做。答案见下期。

三、本课重点：定语

先复习一下以前的语法：定语乃是用来说明名词或代词的特征的，可以是一个词，也可以是一组词。可以用来做定语的有很多：形容词、名词、代词、数词、副词、不定式、动名词、分词、介词短语、从句等。

Jasper White is one of those rare people who believes in ancient myths.
这一句中，of those rare people是个介词短语，修饰one；those是代词，修饰people；rare是形容词，修饰people；who believes in ancient myths是个定语从句，修饰one。

He has just bought a new house in the city, but ever since he moved in, he has had trouble with cars and their owners. 这一句中，形容词new修饰house，介词短语in the city修饰house， 代词their修饰owners。

大家可以按照这种分析方法将28课全文分析一下。注意各种定语出现的频率，此外，注意一下各种定语的位置。

下面分别给各种定语举一些例子：
形容词做定语是很普遍的：
He is a good student. Good
名词也可以做定语：
a baby dog baby
a sports car sports
代词做定语：
my book my
a friend of yours yours
数词做定语：
a second chance second
page 100 100
There are two ways only for this matter. two
副词做定语：
the classroom upstairs upstairs
a day off off
不定式做定语：
That’s the right thing to do.
His idea to write the letter within 3 minutes was not accepted.
It’s time for you to go.
动名词做定语：
sleeping pills
learning methods
介词短语做定语：
The look in his eyes was so strange.
a group of workers
从句做定语：
Jasper White is one of those rare people who believes in ancient myths.
It is one of the ugliest faces I have ever seen.

四、作文线索

本课描写的是自家门口被别人的车占了道，在无计可施的情况下，求助于迷信的故事。

现在请大家把下面的各组句子中的一句适当修改，变成定语从句后合并起来，加上细节，完成一篇作文。参考答案见下期。

1、The woman was an actress. I met her last Sunday.

2、The book was interesting. She lent me last time.

3、The flowers were roses. She loved roses the best.

4、We went to the restaurant. The restaurant was the most expensive and the largest in the city.

5、The food wasn’t so good as its name. We ordered food in the restaurant.