新概念英语第二册第76课【写作课程】

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第七十六课 April Fools’ Day 愚人节

一、摘要写作

1、摘要练习

分别使用快速阅读法、听写法和合并法练习写摘要。

将合并句子写的摘要贴到会员社区。自己根据课文内容，将可以合并的句子合并，去掉一些细节，篇幅争取控制在50字到60字。

2、继续做两句话概括的练习。

用两句概括，请大家自己做。

从第三十一课开始，我不再提供摘要练习的答案。请大家认真做好摘要练习，这是提高表达能力，进而提高写作能力，特别是围绕中心进行写作的好方法。希望大家坚持，我会在会员社区帮大家修改摘要，并且适当做一些讲评，选出比较好的摘要供大家参考。

二、本课重点：文章衔接的手段[2]

上一课我们提到了外指的衔接方法。既然有外指，就应该有内指。我们通过例子来看看什么是内指。
1. Nobody was willing to help the injured in the street. It was such a shame to our society.
2. I would never have believed it. They’ve accepted the story by the police!
好，现在我们来看看本课课文中的内指：
3. This last scene shows you what will happen at the end of the harvest: the famous Calabrian macaroni-eating competition! Signor Fratelli, the present champion, has won it every year since 1991.

下面请大家来判断一下下面的一段文字是不是很好的文字，为什么？
Every year we have this competition among the students. We know who runs fast. We really enjoy the time. The teacher is happy and stays with us. The teacher is always very strict with us.

修改以后：
Every year we have this sports event among ourselves. We do not only find out who runs the fastest, but also enjoy the time when we don’t have to have the boring classes. And it’s also a time to enjoy the smiles of our teacher, who is always strict with us.

大家自己试试找找各个句子之间的联系，用了哪些衔接手法。

三、值得学习的句子

1. To end our special news bulletin, we’re going over to the macaroni fields of Calabria.
To secure more money for our project, we’re going to ask everyone we can find in the community for help.
We have started reciting the texts in order to pass the examination.

四、课后作文练习

Try to fix up an April Fools’ Day story yourself.

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